We
use different writing styles throughout our
bullets comments.
Part of the purpose is to show the
different ways you can say the same thing
depending on your style or your organization's
preferences.
But we don't repeat the same comment over
and over in different styles because that would be
a bit redundant.
Here
are some random samples:
1.
He can always be trusted to represent the company
well.
2.
She takes on additional assignments without
negatively affecting other work.
For self assessment this bullet becomes:
I
take on additional assignments without
negatively affecting my other work.
3.
Mary demonstrates a significant commitment to the
organization’s mission.
4.
It is often difficult for Tony to locate
information or documents when required.
5. Mark transformed a fledgling sales territory into a top producer.
I transformed a fledgling sales territory into a top producer.
6.
Represents the company poorly in most business
interactions.
7.
On many occasions she has provided new approaches
to problem solving that show initiative and
innovation.
8. Mark's ability to assimilate new and complex information resulted in a quick product launch in our market.
For self assessment this bullet becomes:
My ability to assimilate new and complex information resulted in a quick product launch in our market.
9. Articulates directions and instructions clearly and effectively.
10. Mark questions current approaches and explores new, more viable ways to accomplish his objectives.
For self assessment this bullet becomes:
I question current approaches and explore new, more viable ways to accomplish my objectives.